ext_170985 ([identity profile] aestheticized.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] echoes 2008-11-09 11:44 pm (UTC)

*glee*

This is just -- pure joy, which is basically what Merlin is, so fantastic! ♥ As [livejournal.com profile] futuresoon pointed out, you use parenthetical comments to excess; some of those could definitely be inserted into the sentence with a little syntactical shifting. BUT. All of that is really secondary to the force of happiness that this brings. WHICH IS IMMENSE. ♥

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